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Offline Duke Devlin

First signature, please help me out a little
« on: December 08, 2013, 08:39:07 pm »
This is a signature that I have made today like a hour ago and I would like to have you guys rate it, give me some advise and tell me what I could change and improve :)


« Last Edit: December 09, 2013, 07:39:50 pm by ♫ ɒυĸєɒєvℓɪи ♫ »


Offline tajski

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2013, 09:02:43 pm »
1. Render is too blurry
2. The render (ironman) is not properly fitted within the tag
3. The tag (signature) itself is boring and nothing is interesting in it
4. The text doesn't suit the colours as well as the font is pretty boring to look at

Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2013, 09:06:27 pm »
1. Render is too blurry
2. The render (ironman) is not properly fitted within the tag
3. The tag (signature) itself is boring and nothing is interesting in it
4. The text doesn't suit the colours as well as the font is pretty boring to look at

Thanks! I will keep these in mind


Offline sagNN

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2013, 09:09:28 pm »
7/10
Good job  ;) :-*

Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2013, 07:38:30 pm »



rate& comment please


Offline Rawrplus

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2013, 08:36:15 pm »
Stop using so many blur effets :D Blur looks only good in backgrounds or a little bit of blur on certain parts of body simulating movement (note, check my Deadpool signature for example, although it's somewhat rushed and could have been a lot better made, you can see how blur is pushing his face forward and putting point of interest on the foreground for the eye of human).



You can see how only edges of him are blurred and not the entire body so he looks like part of the signature. It's not really done properly, since i spent only around 30 min - 1 hour total on that, but hopefuly you get the idea. Also you can see on the deadpool signature what I meant with the text oppacity (will be mentioned in my post below).

On the pink anime signature, her head is cropped out. You always want a full body in all photos / signatures. It never looks good when somebody is cropped. Also, if you wanted to make her look like inside of the signature, you should have made background layer, her as a a layer on top of it, fuse the layers and then use the stroke so she looks like she's inside the picture and not just copy-pasted on top of it.

On the Regalterror one, it's a bit confusing, I'm not sure what sort of impression am I supposed to get with it. Happy Peter and sluttied up Lois from family guy and Stevie with guns? What is that supposed to mean? Also while I appreciate the attempty to make something artistic around them with blurs, in the long run, it just does an impression of a badly cut out picture placed there, a stamp that has been blurred out by picture. If you want to make them more movealike, Create a layer copy of a pivot (image / person you're using) and use motion blur tool. That way you will have the center of it sharp and a nice little field behind them blurred creating illusion of movement.

Last but not least, I'd recommend using less eye-dragging colors. I'm not saying your signatures should be black and white only, but it looks a lot better and professional if you stick to color schemes of three eye-calming colors, eg. red white and dark red instead of light blue / pink what you used in your signatures.

Also, your current signature the Kirby one which I bet you got from internet and added text (:p), if you want to make text look like it's rotated around a certain object, make sure it's center properly and not going through object's bodyparts. Also you should pay a bit more attention to transparency. For example, in your regalterror signature, the fotn stands out too much on the other hand, on the Kirby one, it's barely noticable. In certain situation, it's good to make text barely noticable, but in those situations you'd generally want to make it look like it's a modern floating sign there, or I don't even know how to describe it. It's simply a feeling you'll develop over years of working with photoshop, when to put focus on it and when not to :)

Hopefuly you've gotten least something from my reply. It's not too easy to listen to critique but it's the only good way of improving :)
« Last Edit: December 09, 2013, 08:50:15 pm by St. Nicholrawrs »


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Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2013, 09:08:52 pm »

Stop using so many blur effets :D

On the pink anime signature, her head is cropped out. You always want a full body in all photos / signatures. It never looks good when somebody is cropped. Also, if you wanted to make her look like inside of the signature, you should have made background layer, her as a a layer on top of it, fuse the layers and then use the stroke so she looks like she's inside the picture and not just copy-pasted on top of it.

On the Regalterror one, it's a bit confusing, I'm not sure what sort of impression am I supposed to get with it. Happy Peter and sluttied up Lois from family guy and Stevie with guns? What is that supposed to mean? Also while I appreciate the attempty to make something artistic around them with blurs, in the long run, it just does an impression of a badly cut out picture placed there

Last but not least, I'd recommend using less eye-dragging colors. I'm not saying your signatures should be black and white only, but it looks a lot better and professional if you stick to color schemes of three eye-calming colors, eg. red white and dark red instead of light blue / pink what you used in your signatures.

Also, your current signature the Kirby one which I bet you got from internet and added text (:p), if you want to make text look like it's rotated around a certain object, make sure it's center properly and not going through object's bodyparts. Also you should pay a bit more attention to transparency. For example, in your regalterror signature, the fotn stands out too much on the other hand, on the Kirby one, it's barely noticable. In certain situation, it's good to make text barely noticable, but in those situations you'd generally want to make it look like it's a modern floating sign there, or I don't even know how to describe it. It's simply a feeling you'll develop over years of working with photoshop, when to put focus on it and when not to :)


The reason I used so many blur effects on the pink anime one is because: When I resized the picture to this format it got super ugly imo and I wanted to kind of fix it with blurring it  (same with the ironman)
I've already asked others about this and they can't find a solution for it: If I have a file open and its 600x200 and I want to add a 1920x1080 background and only use a part of it it gets super cropped up to like 200x200 and I must drag it out from the corner and it gets super ugly :(
Any solution?

Will keep that in mind

Now that you say it I also realise that it doesn't really makes sense. Yeah I failed with the smudge tool on this one (making a new one right now with that)

Will keep that in mind too

That signature was actually made by Razzi (Demon) he made it for me and I really loved it.
About the text transparency I didn't really figure that out. How should I change that?


Now I did something wrong with the stroke and I'm not sure what so could you check it out and tell me what I did wrong:
https://www.mediafire.com/?x04id33zid1ux0i
« Last Edit: December 09, 2013, 09:47:06 pm by ♫ ɒυĸєɒєvℓɪи ♫ »


Offline Razzi

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2013, 09:36:47 pm »
Not to be some ... you know, but i didn't just add the kirby, i done all of it except getting the kirby and a c4d. rest is done by me

@Duke. if your talking about the one i made then... i picked color white and then changed it to Soft Light

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Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #8 on: January 15, 2014, 06:24:50 pm »
Try to use this Guy ?
Edited
Thanks Regalterror :D

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Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #10 on: January 15, 2014, 07:38:50 pm »
it is a nice signature ... But I just dont like the fact that U = V ... anyway , gj  Usama.

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Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2014, 07:11:23 am »
I noticed it too But I cant Find Anyway To Modify that.. if i did whole sig would be ruined. Sorry ..  i hope i helped
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Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #12 on: February 23, 2014, 10:57:29 pm »

rate? <3
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Offline Hajrulla

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #13 on: February 24, 2014, 10:53:01 am »
Do not be insulted,since I don't mean to offend you,but simply those signatures,sucks!I'd suggest you,if you're working with photoshop,go on some tutorials on YOUTUBE,may prove useful.



Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #14 on: February 24, 2014, 11:30:03 am »
Do not be insulted,since I don't mean to offend you,but simply those signatures,sucks!I'd suggest you,if you're working with photoshop,go on some tutorials on YOUTUBE,may prove useful.
you also think this one is sucks?


Offline DonJowy

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #15 on: February 24, 2014, 01:36:35 pm »
Lol. Its quite good. Just tell me , are you merging these 2 pictures together ?


Kellys :(

Offline Hajrulla

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #16 on: February 24, 2014, 04:30:03 pm »
Duke Devlin,you could add the text on the "retarded drawings" on the right,make it more bloody&red,and the character you've added there is very different from the picture,you may need to make him darker and he shall fit with the other things over there.



Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #17 on: February 24, 2014, 05:58:38 pm »

how about this one?


Offline DonJowy

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #18 on: February 24, 2014, 06:21:04 pm »
Duke .. Are you merging pictures ..  adding paint and shizz by yourself .. Or is it just a pic that tou found on a random site ? And adding the text ?


Kellys :(

Offline Duke Devlin

Re: First signature, please help me out a little
« Reply #19 on: February 24, 2014, 07:13:01 pm »
Duke .. Are you merging pictures ..  adding paint and shizz by yourself .. Or is it just a pic that tou found on a random site ? And adding the text ?
I merge them and edit them and add extra stuff ;)

I don't just add text xD