Once upon a time...

[Duke Devlin]

plz make it a stripper btw good story, can you make a story like this for me about a cat that wanted a cake but he had to do stuff to get it? =)

['PL']

plz make it a stripper btw good story, can you make a story like this for me about a cat that wanted a cake but he had to do stuff to get it? =)

Steam cs pls =D

[Ande]

Geez, Make some chapters...

[Silime]

Constructive Criticism:
-atleast use microsoft word to fix the mistakes xD or just proof read it
-Paragraph it
-needs more creativity... especially with the names xD
-MAIN POINT: Silime is didnt come across right, you need to describe his sexiness and masculinity, make sure you really depict his dominance and heroism! Use some speech, you know like "get to da CHOPPA!" and stuff

I dont know where you find the time and energy man but nice one

[liam.]

NVM spamspanryfgharggrhrrhhgh delete this post

['PL']

Constructive Criticism:
-atleast use microsoft word to fix the mistakes xD or just proof read it
-Paragraph it
-needs more creativity... especially with the names xD
-MAIN POINT: Silime is didnt come across right, you need to describe his sexiness and masculinity, make sure you really depict his dominance and heroism! Use some speech, you know like "get to da CHOPPA!" and stuff

I dont know where you find the time and energy man but nice one

Liamina was to be dark rukia(girly style) but then again he is no pedophile to implement the irony... (like me)
Mostly is all ironic and metaphoric until people read books like the Divine Comedy

['PL']

Gotta love reviving the dead and being scammed by people who don't appreciate loyalty on words