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Offline Santa

Re: Poem written by me, show me urs
« Reply #20 on: March 07, 2015, 03:34:31 pm »
Well, I'ts nice to read new poems, maybe poems by you written for some reasons like love..
Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written:

I can hardly remember when it first happened,
But as sson as I realized it, I knew it wont stay forever,
Ever since the time I first touched you, there was something there that awakened in my past,
I've wished I could embrace you and stick to you like there's no way I can move,
Ive always believed you are there with me in some other life,
And that is the reason why I was so sure of who you are,
For this life its taboo and you are shy,
Tell we meet again,
Goodbye.

Dont be shy to post urs :D
Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!
"Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written"

Keep faking maybe ?

http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010_05_01_archive.html

Till we meet again : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html

Why to torture me : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html
Damn!!!

Lol i never though someone will find the source, to make it clear, majd qumsieh is my uncle and he studied english literature, those poems was wrotten by me in arabic and translated by him to english, they are my ideas  :'(  :'(

Its just like we made them together, because we both feel the same, so yeah
« Last Edit: March 07, 2015, 03:39:46 pm by Santa »
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Offline Hajrulla

Re: Poem written by me, show me urs
« Reply #21 on: March 07, 2015, 05:32:22 pm »
I feel some deep bullshit, but whatever, you just got rekt by Refresh.I'd suggest you to keep quiet for a year!



Offline Santa

Re: Poem written by me, show me urs
« Reply #22 on: March 07, 2015, 06:13:46 pm »
come on now stop it, i should have said that my uncle who helped me the most in writing , im sorry alright ?, tbh those two poems have something behind, a really big secret, that we both suffer from, but despite that, can you stop making me feel guilty , to get back to topic , i wrote something years ago as half a poem and more as an attractive advice's and it could fit the mod

Don't learn to be opened for people and to let them get on your nerves
You'll face thousands of challenges and sometimes you lose
Try to change ...
Life is full of people who always try to make you angry, nervous, sad and frustrated
It is just the way things are. You can't expect everyone to agree with you on what you think it is the right thing
Your life experiences are different than theirs...
And so their point of view of the world is different
You should not consume your energy on reacting like this!
This will make them feel more powerful ...
Each time you defend more,
they gain more power
You only have to stick to the thing that you consider it the right thing
You are free to think, to behave, to choose...anything that you want to
And anyone who wants to stop you...
must be thrown out of your way

cheers :D
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Re: Poem written by me, show me urs
« Reply #23 on: March 07, 2015, 06:17:22 pm »
@Santa you're a poet I guess? ??? damn I couldn't even write a sentence. ;D

Offline Santa

Re: Poem written by me, show me urs
« Reply #24 on: March 07, 2015, 06:52:54 pm »
Im not a poet but ive been through much emotional effective situation made me pent-up lot of pressure which is the reason i write those kinds of poems, this one is 100% written by me :
Cant find the entrance to ur life,
no matter how much i try,
all i recieve is a staring back from you,
while you...., you have no clue how much ur sequence of lookings are strong enough to absorb my power,
spasm my heart beat,
and knocks my soul backwords to end up hanged on !
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