Author Topic: Poem written by me, show me urs (Read 215 times)

Santa · « **on:** March 06, 2015, 01:07:15 am »

Well, I'ts nice to read new poems, maybe poems by you written for some reasons like love..
Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written:

I can hardly remember when it first happened,
But as sson as I realized it, I knew it wont stay forever,
Ever since the time I first touched you, there was something there that awakened in my past,
I've wished I could embrace you and stick to you like there's no way I can move,
Ive always believed you are there with me in some other life,
And that is the reason why I was so sure of who you are,
For this life its taboo and you are shy,
Tell we meet again,
Goodbye.

Dont be shy to post urs

SilverQuick · « **Reply #1 on:** March 06, 2015, 01:11:50 am »

Damn short, but touching ...

silex™ · « **Reply #2 on:** March 06, 2015, 08:10:03 am »

Pretty nice.

Red Mist · « **Reply #3 on:** March 06, 2015, 08:11:36 am »

A peom by me

Yo my name is foody
I like big booty
In cs 1.6 am a noob
Who doesnt like boobs
Cs 1.6 is a game
This poem sounds lame

silex™ · « **Reply #4 on:** March 06, 2015, 08:13:33 am »

Quote from: FOODY on March 06, 2015, 08:11:36 am

A peom by me

Yo my name is foody
I like big booty
In cs 1.6 am a noob
Who doesnt like boobs
Cs 1.6 is a game
This poem sounds lame

This is rap mate not a poem.

HuniePop · « **Reply #5 on:** March 06, 2015, 08:44:02 am »

Dying world ruined to ashes
Bloodbath in all dark places
Now it's all over forever
Seeds of hope there will be never

Left alone for collapsion
Suffering devastation
This is the unforgiven fate
Prepare yourselves, before it's too late

Infront of empty faith we stand
Nothing remain from our land
Rising bodies from hell brand
It's all just an empty void of the dead.

Nothing left, nothing remain
Emptyness is my own main
Nothing's going our way
All is left to waste away

Demond all inside and out
Blame you for every your fault
End of everything is here
End of the line is so near.

I call this - WASTELAND.
All credits to Gumball.
All rights reserved.

Santa · « **Reply #6 on:** March 06, 2015, 09:00:40 am »

Hey hey , another hit,
Written today, after mid night...(march 6 2015)

For this time being, life has thrown me back behind its cage,
Got me devided into two pieces far away from each other,
one I live to draw the last parts of, and one that lives at the end of a black long tunnel behind the truth of my consideration, beneath the matter of my power, under the circumstances of my love,
strong enough to absorbe my breath and heavy enough to keep me under its weight.

Pringles · « **Reply #7 on:** March 06, 2015, 09:26:22 am »

Red Wolf · « **Reply #8 on:** March 06, 2015, 09:36:47 am »

So show me urs ill show u mine

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xat1GVnl8-k&t=128

Spoiler (hover to show)

SilverQuick · « **Reply #9 on:** March 07, 2015, 06:01:33 am »

Quote from: FOODY on March 06, 2015, 08:11:36 am

A peom by me

Yo my name is foody
I like big booty
In cs 1.6 am a noob
Who doesnt like boobs
Cs 1.6 is a game
This poem sounds lame

Foody the booty from now on.

supertomi · « **Reply #10 on:** March 07, 2015, 07:10:31 am »

Nice Santa.

Pim · « **Reply #11 on:** March 07, 2015, 12:09:57 pm »

You make my day shine however,
School makes my day rain.

Together you make a rainbow,
A rainbow full of colors,
Some of them beautiful,
Others not as much.

And I walk over this rainbow,
Changing the colors,
over which I'm currently walking,
Changing the mood of my day,
Changing how I feel.

Whenever i walk over your colors,
It feels like I'm literally walking on a rainbow,
Floating above the surface,
Into the sky,
Happy and free,
Like a bird.

Santa · « **Reply #12 on:** March 07, 2015, 01:15:47 pm »

Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!

supertomi · « **Reply #13 on:** March 07, 2015, 01:26:21 pm »

Quote from: Santa on March 07, 2015, 01:15:47 pm

Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!

Man, you are really good..

Santa · « **Reply #14 on:** March 07, 2015, 01:50:50 pm »

Quote from: supertomi on March 07, 2015, 01:26:21 pm

Quote from: Santa on March 07, 2015, 01:15:47 pm
Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!
Man, you are really good..

thanks man, just know that, such writings doesn't really come from nothing,

Pim · « **Reply #15 on:** March 07, 2015, 01:54:01 pm »

I got to admit, that last one was fcking perfect.

The best artists paint out of their emotions

Andrew` · « **Reply #16 on:** March 07, 2015, 02:23:31 pm »

I got one just for my dear Santa.

You better watch out,
you better not cry,
you better not pout
I'm telling you why.
Santa Claus is coming, to town!
With little teen dolls,
and little toy drums,
tut-tut-tut-tuts
and rum-dum-dum-dums,
Santa Claus is coming, to town!
He sees you when you're sleeping,
he knows when you're awake,
he knows if you've been bad or good
so be good, for goodness sake!
Oh, you better watch out,
you better not cry,
you better not pout,
I'm telling you why,
Santa Claus is coming, to town!

Alright, now, one I made up myself.

Emotions are like the sea,
sometimes they're calm,
some others they flee,
emotions are worthy,
they value as gold,
don't waste them my dear,
or you'll feel so cold.
The biggest emotions,
are of love and hate.
Which you'll feel's up to you,
not something called fate.
You choose your own path,
you choose your own fate.
Don't let others spoil it,
you don't deserve it mate.
I know you won't listen,
don't think this is silly,
You'll once regret it badly,
I promise you, really.

I made this one up just now

Pringles · « **Reply #17 on:** March 07, 2015, 02:24:21 pm »

Quote from: Santa on March 06, 2015, 01:07:15 am

Well, I'ts nice to read new poems, maybe poems by you written for some reasons like love..
Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written:

I can hardly remember when it first happened,
But as sson as I realized it, I knew it wont stay forever,
Ever since the time I first touched you, there was something there that awakened in my past,
I've wished I could embrace you and stick to you like there's no way I can move,
Ive always believed you are there with me in some other life,
And that is the reason why I was so sure of who you are,
For this life its taboo and you are shy,
Tell we meet again,
Goodbye.

Dont be shy to post urs

Quote from: Santa on March 07, 2015, 01:15:47 pm

Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!

"Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written"

Keep faking maybe ?

http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010_05_01_archive.html

Till we meet again : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html

Why to torture me : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html

Lagger · « **Reply #18 on:** March 07, 2015, 02:25:25 pm »

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Who the fk
still writes poems?

supertomi · « **Reply #19 on:** March 07, 2015, 03:16:10 pm »

Quote from: ReFresh on March 07, 2015, 02:24:21 pm

Quote from: Santa on March 06, 2015, 01:07:15 am
Well, I'ts nice to read new poems, maybe poems by you written for some reasons like love..
Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written:

I can hardly remember when it first happened,
But as sson as I realized it, I knew it wont stay forever,
Ever since the time I first touched you, there was something there that awakened in my past,
I've wished I could embrace you and stick to you like there's no way I can move,
Ive always believed you are there with me in some other life,
And that is the reason why I was so sure of who you are,
For this life its taboo and you are shy,
Tell we meet again,
Goodbye.

Dont be shy to post urs
Quote from: Santa on March 07, 2015, 01:15:47 pm
Why to Torture Me
Why to torture me when you can finish me in an instant?!
I was just walkin' to the store when you passed by and didn't even say hi...
Ma tears flew outta my eyes and fell down the road !
I tried to wipe them off,
but I knew they won't drain,
For you threw your knife severely to cut off ma strain...
And oh God, I found it fuckin' penetrating my deepest membrane!
So please, I worship the hell out of you to finish up m body,
and throw out ma brain,
Cause I don wanna live...
I just don wanna live again !!!
"Sometimes I have that feeling to write what I feel, and express my mood, here goes one of my greatest poems I ever written"

Keep faking maybe ?

http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010_05_01_archive.html

Till we meet again : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html

Why to torture me : http://majdqumsieh.blogspot.be/2010/05/why-to-torture-me.html

Damn!!!