Seems to be well-organised and realistic. You just need to make sure that you cover the sky/empty space with something suitable and add a couple of unique, effective machinery. Also, make sure that you provide hidden guns, well-connected vents.
However, are you a jailbreak player? Because I personally never seen you in the server; a good designer need have high knowledge of the gameplay, you need to put your self in multiple situations, whether as a CT- checking the all the possibilities of the factors which might allow the prisoners to rebel. After all, the most vital element of a map design is the balance and stability in which I assume you know that 
I am sure rawrplus is helping him in that respect
Rawrplus the Jailbreak Player
So dreamy thoughts.
While you may not see me on the server in current days, I've spent over 2 years on jailbreak in Ambrosia, also being admin there since the very early days of Ambrosia, the rules you are currently playing on were made by me (so in other words I still know what's up to date in jailbreak) and I also was around with the jailbreak revival. Don't underestimate my jailbreak knowledge
