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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #40 on: December 04, 2013, 05:22:03 pm »
Sorry for going off topic

And sorry sniper i was just trolling xD

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Sorrrry  !
No problem <33333

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #41 on: December 18, 2013, 10:18:16 pm »
" DESTROY THE JAIL 47 "
                           

In a quiet town free of criminals .  the police  punished severely lawbreakers , but in spite of all this , one of them rebelled , and assaulted a beautiful girl in a dark street , he was punished , beaten , wounded and tortured , then thrown in jail . in an empty cell , does not contain anything , he stayed there for a hole week . but after that he woke up from his coma , but sadly he lost his  memory and could no longer walk.
Retrieve a few days after his memory was back and he became a very powerful figure , able to influence anyone . so he decided to establish a team gang called " JailBreakerz ".
Gather his team , set up a serious plan ,and fled from prison . all the crimminals in the town decided to join his gang . so they decided to  sabotage all prisons in the country .  and one by one all the jails are falling down , and increasing the number of JLz members. and spread gang members across the country
and after destroying 46 prison , .
the governor gathered with leaders of the other countries and decided to create the largest prison in the world , that will be built under the governor's mansion , and will be more guarded .
the founder of the JLz gang dicided to chose a team composed of 30 people trusted  , and most malice on the government , he called them to his own room , and when they entered , they encountered a large sign written on it. " DESTROY THE JAIL 47 "
Immediately after reading the sign , they came out to fight the police , and destroying the streets , and then presented themselves to the goverment.
they was token to the most secured jail . they were just waiting for their boss to give his orders . he told them to kill the governor , granting two choices :
one. either fleeing from prison and kill the king , or two, sacrificing their lives for the redemption of their friends , and the destruction of the palace and prison together .
They chose the second route , the bomb , and the killing of all.
The 29 members of the gang with some riots , where there is chaos and rebellion of prisoners , some in the dining room , and others in the golf ball , while the other individual was hiding in his cell by posing as a patient .
Concern the ruling regarding this matter , and gave orders to arrest all the rebelers .
After the arrest, the king left his chamber property, then went down to the jail, he killed all the JLz members , one by one, with the exception that a prisoner who claimed the disease, where the infiltration to the king's chamber, and planted the bomb.then he  came down to the prison and stapped the governor from the back in the neck while he was busy with killing other members of JLz . and then lifted his hands to the sky,  and all the guards were confused of his reaction, and suddenly the bomb exploded and destroyed the prison and the palace with it .
this shows how powerful JLz gang is . and that there is no secured protected jail in the world that cannot be destroyeeeeeeeeeeeed !!




The end :D



i know this is fail story . i just tried to do my best and make it short and good . hope you like it :)
i wanted to show how powerful JLz clan is and ofc how old . so good luck to all the prticipants .

BucKK
« Last Edit: December 18, 2013, 10:28:13 pm by ★ßʋςкК★ »

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #42 on: December 18, 2013, 11:32:47 pm »
19 - Terminator

                                                            A STORY WITH NO HOPE


There were a high secured jail in a very far isolated island... You barely can see a helicopter flying arround or a boat passing by...
 In fact... the only boat who would go to that island is a boat used bring more heartless and unforgiven prisonners... Such a nightmare there... Hell on earth... Only murderers or dirty drug dealers or Gang leaders belong there  :-X .
Recently, Several members of the most dangerous gang on earth been caught and brought to that prisons... That gang is "JailBreakerz" Dear reader, Be sure when I tell you that this gang has more respect... has more power... then a president himself ! That's why, Escaping from the prison was expected.. Only couple of questions you would ask : Just When? How? What to do ?..
The plan was assembled... Time was been set... Calls were made secretly to seek help... And in a very dark night... Some JailBreakerz succed to parachute to the edge of the island near the prison taking advantage of the darkness in a mission to locate & save their mates... There were no way to escape from the most secured prison that easy... Thats why they were disguised as a guard... None of the real guards noticed anything strange or weird about them... They could reach the cells and the armory without any suspecious... So they took a plenty of guns, open the cells for the other Jailbreakers and gave them weapons... True, they are outnumbered ... But they could easily manage to kill the guard thanks to their high skills ! All the guards are dead now... The prison is empty now... As Jailbreakerz love to show-off they left a note on the dead Warden's Desk saying :



Jailbreakerz, OBEY OR PRAY

And so it is the end... The Jail is Now a Grave...


The end ... THank you for reading  ;D
« Last Edit: December 19, 2013, 12:28:08 pm by TerminatoOr »

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #43 on: December 19, 2013, 01:03:29 am »
Both stories accepted in the compettion.. I am really amazed of how much creativity lays in you fellas <3


Good job :)

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #44 on: December 19, 2013, 01:04:25 am »
21 hour 56 minutes 40 second LEFT.

Offline Lester The Molester

Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #45 on: December 19, 2013, 04:49:15 am »
Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #46 on: December 19, 2013, 01:02:51 pm »
Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

Be sure to read before you post. 25 taken.

Offline Lester The Molester

Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #47 on: December 19, 2013, 01:39:47 pm »

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #48 on: December 19, 2013, 02:14:05 pm »
Fred69 - 13

Accepted.

Offline .-Fe[L]iX~onFir[E]:3

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #49 on: December 19, 2013, 02:27:22 pm »
Nick, Number :DraGoNFirE/A/ , 2


What IS Ambrosia JAILBREAK ?

Ambrosia Jailbreak is A big home that u can stay in ,  with friends u don't know and u know , ambrosia's jailbreak home just have 24 slots , as a big family in real life , u stay together , play together , the owner of the home is Roni , and his helper is Sami , they are like your mum and dad .. u must respect them , do what they want, also, this home have rules you must follow , you must read rules before going inside the home , if u are a good guy , u will have a rank on it , like admin ,etc...
Ambrosia jailbreak server is a good way to know online friends and u can talk to them , know about them .... jailbreak server is the most loved server in ambrosia , as i said , its the best way to make friends (ONLINE) and to have fun...
I'm sure if you can go to this home , you will have fun.. :)


Regards,
DraGoNFirE/A/ xD :D


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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #50 on: December 19, 2013, 04:40:41 pm »
DraGoNFirE/A/ , 2

accepted.. Story accepted as well..

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« Reply #51 on: December 20, 2013, 04:18:54 pm »
Contest is over ?? Goodluck to all :)
Kasabi Approves

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« Reply #52 on: December 20, 2013, 04:27:02 pm »
Locked to prevent spam. Winners will be announced very soon :)


Kellys :(

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Re: Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !
« Reply #53 on: December 31, 2013, 02:18:58 pm »
http://www.ambrosia-servers.eu/community/index.php?topic=23342.0

Check who the winners are.. Archived.

More surprises will follow! :)