Competion #2 - JLz ONLY - The surprises never stop !

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List updated !

[Kasabiii]

The presidential jail

To make sure your country is safe , you have to arrest the most brilliant , risky thieves therefore the presidential
jail was built

The Presidential Jail is a huge secret that nobody can know it unless hes the Prime minister or the king of the country
it contains the most bloodthirsty assassins the world ever knew. But You cant expect having all these Thieves without
troubles Because they are so dangerous but the thing that the president or the guard didn't know , that there was a
gang, a great gang called Jailbreakerz.

Jailbreakerz Contains the finest Prisoners of all , they are intelligent, unforgivable people in one Gang Which is planning to break into this
jail and let the president know that there's nobody can stop them. After having meetings and planning to escape this well built jail ,
they decided the date and time to escape with a brilliant plane made by them.

December 10 2012 , Jailbreakerz made their final touches on the plan , In the break everyone made his role and checked the yard ,
entrance and the jail from inside

In the night , one of them pretended to be suffering from a disease so the guards opened the two guys cell to rescue him but
they didn't know that he and his buddy got a knife made of razor blade , they stabbed them and hid their body's in a previous made vent
 , Jailbreakers got the keys from the guards and opened the cell for the other members They escaped from inside but there's guards outside.

the presidential jail isn't named for nothing , as many of guards don't know that there was a secret tunnel which leads into the president's office it self , good for Jailbreakerz
that there were a member was working in the jail years ago , so he lead them to it and they reached the president's office. They didn't escaped from there but to let the president
know that we are invincible the leader wrote a message for the president , it said

The Most secured jail ? I don't think so
Jailbreakerz.

They continued to the other exit which leads
into the street across the president's office.
 



I know im a noob but this is what i written , hope u like it
P.S : Dear Popay And ray , can you please extend the story from 250 words to 400 ? Thanks

[P o p a y]

NEW RULE - The story must contain over 100 words, without a top limit - You can write as long as you want.

Kasabi, Good job mate ! You surprised me, I didn't expect to see this kind of creativity. Well done.

[Kasabiii]

ohhhh :3 Thanks i thought i was too noob

[TerminatoOr]

Nice one Kasabi,
by the way , can i write story about our Jb server( using players name + talking about admin cmds and rtd) or should it be close to reality like Kasabi wrote it?

[P o p a y]

You can terminator, but do not write an event, write a story.. Let kasabi be an example.. He did a good job, but I am waiting to see more stories.

[|B|urN]

Building of JailbreakerZ

The American Police was in great power and was arresting every criminal in America . The people was trusted in them and the people are safe because of them ..

 The Owner of JailbreakerZ can feel that the police is gaining power which can make them down .. He decided to add the worlds best criminal in his team So he gave order to his  men to find the best criminals which can be useful for his gang…After 9 months the Gang of JailbreakerZ was ready . The owner decided to rush at the Liberty Jail at 7/12/2013 to make the prisoners escape . Then the gang of JailbreakerZ need some very good and useful weapons . They started robbing the weapons from different shops .They have made a tunnel from which they will enter the Liberty Jail .
Then the day came when they have to rush on Liberty Jail . Everyone was armed and was running in the tunnel as fast as they can . When they entered the jail they saw 2 guards standing in front of them and was watching T.V .. 3 members of gang go near them slowly and stabbed them .. Then they have to go to the General office , there was the master key which can open all the cells . Some of the members take their positions near cells and some of them were in tunnel . The criminals were going slowly slowly and reached the General office there were 5 guards inside the office . The JailbreakerZ rush suddenly and killed all of them they cant even understand what was happening then they took the master key and opened every cells .

 But they have given a letter in the office

Code: [Select]

No one can beat JailbreakerZ , no matter how powerful are you
Every criminal escaped from there . Every criminal joined the gang of JailbreakerZ . Now the JailbreakerZ was one of the powerful Gang in the World .

PS : im noob in writing story just a try anyways if no one write a story except kasabi i will be on 2nd place xD

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So far so good.

[Lester The Molester]

Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

The story,hope you like it:Once a day,there was a 25 years old guy who lives in the youth of America,he was accused of killing someone,then the residence called a police man to take him to jail.When they arrived to jail,the accused guy saw a jailer(guard of the jail)in front of prisoners jail.He was telling him all the story that he is innocent,he agreed with him to let him leave the jail in secret.
In the jail,there was a little room with a large box in,they put inside prisoners dead body.The jailer must get a key to open it.The jailer told the accused man that at night,he will open the box and put him inside to take the box outside the jail to be saved.(After 4 hours)He waited all the time the jailer to open to him the box to leave the jail because he was inside.After many hours,he started to panic about the oxygen.He used a machine to eclair him,and by mistake he saw that the jailer was behind him inside the box.Finally,both stayed inside and none came to open to them...That's what we call:Rebell

Thank you for reading

[DonJowy]

Nice guys. Waiting to see more stories

[|B|urN]

Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

The story,hope you like it:Once a day,there was a 25 years old guy who lives in the youth of America,he was accused of killing someone,then the residence called a police man to take him to jail.When they arrived to jail,the accused guy saw a jailer(guard of the jail)in front of prisoners jail.He was telling him all the story that he is innocent,he agreed with him to let him leave the jail in secret.
In the jail,there was a little room with a large box in,they put inside prisoners dead body.The jailer must get a key to open it.The jailer told the accused man that at night,he will open the box and put him inside to take the box outside the jail to be saved.(After 4 hours)He waited all the time the jailer to open to him the box to leave the jail because he was inside.After many hours,he started to panic about the oxygen.He used a machine to eclair him,and by mistake he saw that the jailer was behind him inside the box.Finally,both stayed inside and none came to open to them...That's what we call:Rebell

Thank you for reading

Good try Btw how many words? xD

[Lester The Molester]

Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

The story,hope you like it:Once a day,there was a 25 years old guy who lives in the youth of America,he was accused of killing someone,then the residence called a police man to take him to jail.When they arrived to jail,the accused guy saw a jailer(guard of the jail)in front of prisoners jail.He was telling him all the story that he is innocent,he agreed with him to let him leave the jail in secret.
In the jail,there was a little room with a large box in,they put inside prisoners dead body.The jailer must get a key to open it.The jailer told the accused man that at night,he will open the box and put him inside to take the box outside the jail to be saved.(After 4 hours)He waited all the time the jailer to open to him the box to leave the jail because he was inside.After many hours,he started to panic about the oxygen.He used a machine to eclair him,and by mistake he saw that the jailer was behind him inside the box.Finally,both stayed inside and none came to open to them...That's what we call:Rebell

Thank you for reading

Good try Btw how many words? xD

Between the 350-450,if you want...count them xD

[sagNN]

Nick, Number :Fred69, 25

The story,hope you like it:Once a day,there was a 25 years old guy who lives in the youth of America,he was accused of killing someone,then the residence called a police man to take him to jail.When they arrived to jail,the accused guy saw a jailer(guard of the jail)in front of prisoners jail.He was telling him all the story that he is innocent,he agreed with him to let him leave the jail in secret.
In the jail,there was a little room with a large box in,they put inside prisoners dead body.The jailer must get a key to open it.The jailer told the accused man that at night,he will open the box and put him inside to take the box outside the jail to be saved.(After 4 hours)He waited all the time the jailer to open to him the box to leave the jail because he was inside.After many hours,he started to panic about the oxygen.He used a machine to eclair him,and by mistake he saw that the jailer was behind him inside the box.Finally,both stayed inside and none came to open to them...That's what we call:Rebell

Thank you for reading

Good try Btw how many words? xD

Between the 350-450,if you want...count them xD

I did, it's 207 words

[==>Don$N(+)P3R==> NinjaWaft#]

JailbreakerZ Life

So 4/12/2012 there was a group of guys that were sitting on the street talking about cs and how to play jailbreak, all of this guys were non lifers , they play cs, and get drunk on the streets, so once 4 guys were passing on the streets and saw these non lifers, so they were laughing at them in a mean way and making fun of them, taking pics and whatever.. so the "non lifers" became mad and got the knives from their pockets and attacked the others guys, after a while the police came and arrested all, when they went to jail they thought of playing jailbreak with the police . They thought of something which they can make to attack the police and escape, they said we should try to rebel as in game since in game its easy to escape, so at midnight 1 guy called the security and told him open the cells i need to go to the bathroom, while the others were making themselves sleeping, the security opened the guys rebelled and killed him, they took his gun and the keys and escaped. They were so happy enjoying the Cs in a real life and they continued there life rebelling and making fights .

The end xD

[|B|urN]

No bathroom in cell :O omg if sm1 wants to go in bathroom 4 am how can they go xD

good try

[==>Don$N(+)P3R==> NinjaWaft#]

No bathroom in cell :O omg if sm1 wants to go in bathroom 4 am how can they go xD

good try

It was a troll to escape

And there is bathrooms in the jail -_- how they Shit or pee? -.-" Logic # xD

[|B|urN]

No bathroom in cell :O omg if sm1 wants to go in bathroom 4 am how can they go xD

good try

It was a troll to escape

And there is bathrooms in the jail -_- how they Shit or pee? -.-" Logic # xD

The gaurd didnt say to him that go there is bathroom in cell pee there? or guard was abnormal?

[==>Don$N(+)P3R==> NinjaWaft#]

No bathroom in cell :O omg if sm1 wants to go in bathroom 4 am how can they go xD

good try

It was a troll to escape

And there is bathrooms in the jail -_- how they Shit or pee? -.-" Logic # xD

The gaurd didnt say to him that go there is bathroom in cell pee there? or guard was abnormal?

It was 4 am the guard is semi sleepy -_- he thought he is just 1 guy he wont do anything so he  let him stop spamming its just a story ZZZZ

[P o p a y]

You can use your imagination, no one said that has to be true or a lie.

Please stay on topic and show some respect to stories that are written.

Btw, all stories are accepted in the competition for now.

[|B|urN]

Sorry for going off topic

And sorry sniper i was just trolling xD



Sorrrry  !