Well, a few points:
1) This is a very public place to discuss a demo of an admin, surely messaging this directly to the heads would be better.
2) In the second demo individual wall bangs don't concern me, it's the nature of the successful ones that does. Visible tracing following a target that is being wounded, yes sound tells you you're hitting "meat" but not which way its moving or how fast, he doesn't over drag his spray or guess wrong once he starts hitting a target and it starts moving.
3) Minor point but did intrigue me, Dolm doesn't check several common spots unless there's a target in them later on in rounds (dark spot in the hut, above hut roof, tight right in the ramp room) but this could simply mean he's confident in his own aim and reaction times if someone does shoot him from them and he has a radar visible on his screen - something we can't see except from a POV demo.
4) The admin ESP is actually less helpful in watching people's decision making, mostly its based from sound, I strongly advise watching people without it for a while to get a feel for them and their thinking process.
Anyway, thanks for the submission would suggest moving this to a private part of the forums as you don't want any old joe blogs commenting on it (like me!), I'm instrested to know others opinions.