Opinions!

[tajski]

Me and my mate at school decided to see who's work is better.. So here it is..

[Razzi]

I like v1 because it looks so shiny & the colors

both r good but i like V1

[Lazarus]

I like v1 because it looks so shiny & the colors

both r good but i like V1

You must be weird, it has no background.

2nd one is much better more effects

[Cepheus]

I'm going to say that the second one is better because it has more background detail and the colors are mixed together.
About your one (first), I will say that you needed to add more detail and colors/objects regarding whatever that game is.

[Rawrplus]

You could have spent more than 3 seconds on the font 

[tajski]

Both graphics are at the development stages.. I will upload both outcomes once they're finished.

Locked for now.