Well, its your opinion, but as I always say, id like feedback, as I can improve, and working with procedural textures isnt that easy, trust me, things I make are not pre-made. I make things from scratch, no use of plugins or any part of any template, this, probably makes me someone who knows how to use C4D. Its his decision if he wants to take it or not. Its your opinion, I respect it, but id respect more if you would tell me where I am wrong, so I can improve it. 
I said where you are wrong and it's the theme that's incorrect man. I have nothing against your work but your work doesn't suit the theme of the clan if you get me. Like I understand that you do all the fancy 3D but it has to work out with the rest and your design is just not fitting in my eyes
